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An Urban Landscape... by TallJohn An Urban Landscape... by TallJohn
...is my inspiration.

Submitted as this week's assignment for :iconhdr-club:.
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There are several layers to look at in this piece of art. The foreground is quite catchy for the eye. The small verandas from an old desolate-like building facing (on the far right) a newly unrbznized building with at least 20 stories is well-composed. Then a huge gap in "society" (at least how I see it) with just a small hill and few cars here and there... this all overlooks a wonderfully captured horizon showing a busy downtown with skyscrapers and just full of activity and life. For me, it is like a shot from a suburb that overlooks the downtown.
The only thing I am not keen about in this photo is the sky. Although the cloud dispersal is quite amazing, I feel it is more like it has been "Drawn" rather than captured. Indeed, this may add a nice mood but it also depends how the viewers perceives it.
One interesting subject in this photo is the tunnel/bridge right in the middle. I wish you showed a little bit more of it which could have added a nicer feel of what is next.
Also, the furthest horizon on the right shows the sea. Which could be 100's of meters away and hidden by all the city landscape, yet we can still feel and see it is there.
I think the composition and vision of this piece indeed deserves a 5/5. I just love all the elements.
The best part of your HDR, I feel, is the hill right in te middle. The most significant element would be the small verandas facing the skyscrapers.
What do you think?
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CopilMatur Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
in full view is lovely :) !!!

great job! :hug:
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TallJohn Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2009
Thank you very much.
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RCPage Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2009
:D
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TallJohn Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2009
Hehehe
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bigdan43 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009  Professional Photographer
This one really pops, lots of color mixed in with the hdr makes a good photo. I normally dislike how many hdr photos tend to look washed out. The clouds look really neat as well, almost look like 3d :P
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TallJohn Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2009
It's called a circular pano, pal. And thanks.
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Jogi1960 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Great HDR, the clouds are the point of an i. :wave:
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TallJohn Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
Sorry. The point of an i?
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BryanDesign Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
It's an expression for the finishing touch... And I agree...
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TallJohn Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009
Gotcha. Thank you!
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